fix: metamaskbot comment nits (#29636)

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This PR adds minor fixes and enhancements to things that were not worth
blocking the original metamaskbot PR for. Things like, comments, style,
reusability should be improved by this PR. Interestingly, I also saw
that the `$OWNER` environment variable was missing, but somehow the
workflow still worked. I added this environment variable just to make it
sane.

## **Related issues**

Fixes: #28572

## **Manual testing steps**

1. Everything should still work

## **Screenshots/Recordings**

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.github/workflows/publish-prerelease.yml

@@ -25,41 +25,44 @@ jobs:
           BASE_REF: ${{ github.event.pull_request.base.ref }}
         run: |
           merge_base="$(git merge-base "origin/${BASE_REF}" HEAD)"
-          echo "Merge base is '${merge_base}'"
           echo "MERGE_BASE=${merge_base}" >> "$GITHUB_OUTPUT"
+          echo "Merge base is '${merge_base}'"
 
       - name: Get CircleCI job details
         id: get-circleci-job-details
         env:
-          REPOSITORY: ${{ github.repository }}
+          OWNER: ${{ github.repository_owner }}
+          REPOSITORY: ${{ github.event.repository.name }}
+          # For a `pull_request` event, the branch is `github.head_ref``.
           BRANCH: ${{ github.head_ref }}
+          # For a `pull_request` event, the head commit hash is `github.event.pull_request.head.sha`.
           HEAD_COMMIT_HASH: ${{ github.event.pull_request.head.sha }}
+          JOB_NAME: job-publish-prerelease
         run: |
-          pipeline_id=$(curl --silent "https://circleci.com/api/v2/project/gh/$OWNER/$REPOSITORY/pipeline?branch=$BRANCH" | jq -r ".items | map(select(.vcs.revision == \"${HEAD_COMMIT_HASH}\" )) | first | .id")
+          pipeline_id=$(curl --silent "https://circleci.com/api/v2/project/gh/$OWNER/$REPOSITORY/pipeline?branch=$BRANCH" | jq --arg head_commit_hash "${HEAD_COMMIT_HASH}" -r '.items | map(select(.vcs.revision == $head_commit_hash)) | first | .id')
           workflow_id=$(curl --silent "https://circleci.com/api/v2/pipeline/$pipeline_id/workflow" | jq -r ".items[0].id")
-          job_details=$(curl --silent "https://circleci.com/api/v2/workflow/$workflow_id/job" | jq -r '.items[] | select(.name == "job-publish-prerelease")')
-          build_num=$(echo "$job_details" | jq -r '.job_number')
+          job_details=$(curl --silent "https://circleci.com/api/v2/workflow/$workflow_id/job" | jq --arg job_name "${JOB_NAME}" -r '.items[] | select(.name == $job_name)')
 
+          build_num=$(echo "$job_details" | jq -r '.job_number')
           echo 'CIRCLE_BUILD_NUM='"$build_num" >> "$GITHUB_OUTPUT"
+
           job_id=$(echo "$job_details" | jq -r '.id')
           echo 'CIRCLE_WORKFLOW_JOB_ID='"$job_id" >> "$GITHUB_OUTPUT"
 
-          echo "Getting artifacts from pipeline '${pipeline_id}', workflow '${workflow_id}', build number '${build_num}', job ID '${job_id}'"
+          echo "Getting artifacts from pipeline '${pipeline_id}', workflow '${workflow_id}', build number '${build_num}', job id '${job_id}'"
 
       - name: Get CircleCI job artifacts
         env:
           CIRCLE_WORKFLOW_JOB_ID: ${{ steps.get-circleci-job-details.outputs.CIRCLE_WORKFLOW_JOB_ID }}
         run: |
-          mkdir -p "test-artifacts/chrome/benchmark"
+          mkdir -p test-artifacts/chrome/benchmark
           curl --silent --location "https://output.circle-artifacts.com/output/job/${CIRCLE_WORKFLOW_JOB_ID}/artifacts/0/test-artifacts/chrome/benchmark/pageload.json" > "test-artifacts/chrome/benchmark/pageload.json"
 
-          bundle_size=$(curl --silent --location "https://output.circle-artifacts.com/output/job/${CIRCLE_WORKFLOW_JOB_ID}/artifacts/0/test-artifacts/chrome/bundle_size.json")
-          mkdir -p "test-artifacts/chrome"
-          echo "${bundle_size}" > "test-artifacts/chrome/bundle_size.json"
+          mkdir -p test-artifacts/chrome
+          curl --silent --location "https://output.circle-artifacts.com/output/job/${CIRCLE_WORKFLOW_JOB_ID}/artifacts/0/test-artifacts/chrome/bundle_size.json" > "test-artifacts/chrome/bundle_size.json"
 
-          stories=$(curl --silent --location "https://output.circle-artifacts.com/output/job/${CIRCLE_WORKFLOW_JOB_ID}/artifacts/0/storybook/stories.json")
-          mkdir "storybook-build"
-          echo "${stories}" > "storybook-build/stories.json"
+          mkdir storybook-build
+          curl --silent --location "https://output.circle-artifacts.com/output/job/${CIRCLE_WORKFLOW_JOB_ID}/artifacts/0/storybook/stories.json" > "storybook-build/stories.json"
 
       - name: Publish prerelease
         env: